Comments on: A Fictional Interlude for October

By: Rick Westlake

Rick Westlake — Fri, 11 Jan 2013 01:00:15 +0000

I know I’m weighing in awfully late on poor Beatrice, but there’s more than art to a story like this. I hung around a monastery from the mid-700s to the late 900s because I didn’t realize my body had died …

By: nuovoiconoclast

nuovoiconoclast — Fri, 18 May 2012 20:13:00 +0000

Very nice! I like that you don’t see it coming; for a bit there I thought the mob had somehow warned customers away from her as one more way to make the point to Madam.

By: Rapid

Rapid — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 02:01:44 +0000

Did you know that The Love Ranch in Mound House, NV is reported to be haunted?

By: Maggie McNeill

Maggie McNeill — Sat, 27 Nov 2010 20:38:50 +0000

Thank you, baby! Please feel free to comment as often as you like!

By: Maggie's Man

Maggie's Man — Sat, 27 Nov 2010 20:33:34 +0000

Wow!!!! I never commented on your blog before, but I have to say this is one of your best stories ever. Still have chills.

By: Maggie McNeill

Maggie McNeill — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 20:47:07 +0000

Correct, or else she’s in denial. Look at the last line of her narration…

By: Maggie McNeill

Maggie McNeill — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 20:44:47 +0000

Thank you, Stephen! If you haven’t seen my earlier ones you might enjoy them as well; they were published on July 19th, August 23rd and September 12th.

By: stephenpaterson

stephenpaterson — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 19:32:09 +0000

An enchanting tale, Maggie! Enjoyed it immensely.

By: Sailor Barsoom

Sailor Barsoom — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 18:30:15 +0000

Interesting. So the poor girl doesn’t know that she’s dead.